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[Norato - At the end *Preview*]

Hollow

Somehow it feels empty :S
I can recognise a few layers but it still doesn't sound full and rich. Anyway, nice tune and really clean sweep. I like it. Is it out tomorrow???

5/5 9/10

Norato responds:

Yes, Tommorrow I´ll release it. It sound empty couse this is not the main part of the song you know :) ther´s missing Closed hats, background and offbass. Btw I just completed brand new song called Haunt (trance/ electro).

[SNES at Atlantis]

Shades of Basshunter :P

Nicely constructed. The song could use some depth from a sub bass or something similar like background noise. It feels empty to be honest. Nice melody you've got going. Hope you extend this one. Really enjoyed it :P

5/5 7/10

[=The Piano Man=]

1.08? WTF?!

Deserves more than what it is.

Nicely constructed. The main melody needs some variation. Maybe change it up once every 4 bars. Change the title to "WIP". I can feel that the song is about to drop into some hardstyle at 1:12 after some dithering of the melody. This could turn out great! I hope you carry on with this one. Really enjoyed it :)
5/5 8/10
(gave you a 5 in the hopes of "getting it up there") :)
hope it helped :D

[Bizarrer Club]

Samples are rubbish

Sorry to say that, but they are.
The tune you have is soooooo good, it almost kills me to see it go to waste because of the quality of the samples. D:

Try get a sample pack for the genre you're doing and master the song when you're finished.

Samples let it down have to say.

Make itlonger next time. 4/5 7/10

[-Waterworks-]

Huh?

I can't see how the rating is 2.66. Must be getting 0 bombed by the self-obsessed artists who think by doing this will get their tracks higher...
Anyway, very nicely constructed. Made good use of the instruments you chose. I think you revisit this and use some more modern sythns and thumping bassdrums. I'm really liking the tune. Good work mate, kepp it up :)

5/5 10/10

Cleod-9 responds:

Thanks! Glad you like it!

[yayayayay (demo)]

WOW

Dunno how you got these sounds. But they are orgasmic!!!
A nice little piece you've got here :) Nicely put together.

5/5 10/10

lordaris responds:

I did. And thanks for the comment!

If you want I'll tell you like I did, or I do a tutorial.

[Waveform (Hardstyle)]

Nice basssss...

The construction of the song is brilliant. I can predict where it's going and not be blown out my chair with badly timed impacts and synths.

I'm not prominent in the Hardstyle genre, but I do love all types of dance music. And this has definitely delivered :) Drums, BASS, synths are all spot on. I don't think this can possibly be improved. So this is a keeper :D

Keep up the GREAT work, honestly :P
10/10 5/5

If you're into dubstep, would you kindly return the favour?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/419299
If you don't like dubstep then don't worry about reviewing it.

Cheers.

Dj-Zexus responds:

Thanks for the feedback. :D
I'm glad you liked it.
I'll gladly return the favor. (:

[Ghoulish Groove]

No longer being "0 bombed"

The song was good.

Not the best, but I thought you'd like an honest review. So here goes: *ahem*
-the bassline sounded a bit rough, there wasn't that nice sort of melody to it. I'm not musically educated by any means, but to this untrained ear, the notes sound off. Maybe try to keep all of them minor/major etc.
-the song had a nice flow to it. I especially like the drum patterns you've got going there
-the organs I didn't notice much off. They just didn't seem to stand out. I suggest automating your channels' volume envelopes. Have a play round with them and you may find it adds this whole new level of depth to your songs.

Hope this helps! Oh and btw, I came from the review request forum, so if you're into DUBSTEP would you be able to return the favour? If you're not into dubstep, then don't bother because you may not like it. I don't want to be 0bombed or 1bombed just because someone doesn't like that particular genre of music. I wanna keep the ratings high to get more exposure.

Anyway, 4/5 7/10
Keep practising mate, and keep up the good work

Darkmaster603 responds:

I don't know much about dubstep, but I can try!

I know about automation, I thought the organs where fine. I didn't want them to be too loud in the mix, just something in the background. I might increase their volume though, nice attention to detail.

The bassline was musically fine. I don't really know what you mean, but it was an Am-Emaj-Emaj-Am bass line with an A Harmonic minor scale line. If it was all Major or all Minor it would be pretty uninteresting and would sound pretty bad. Maybe you could clarify what sounds off about it because I'm a little confused here. It might just be musical preferences, but I thought it had a nice melody. Oh well, music is subjective after all.

I really liked the drums in here, probably one of my favorite things about the song.

Thank you for taking the time to review this piece. I'll keep the suggestions in mind.

[Canon (Drumstep Mix Demo)]

5/5

Can't believe this was rated 0.69 when I got here. I don't understand people's votes. This is abnormally clean, crisp and well constructed. Who cares if there wasn't a massive drop and heavy wobble basses. For what it is, it's great!!! You should remix this with DnB styled drum patterns. Would be better off in the DnB category rather than Drumstep. Keep up the good work mate, I like enjoyed this.

Likonan responds:

Thank you so very much for reviewing! :D

I am considering all options regarding the beats. When I'll have time, I'll try making it more D'N'B. :)

[inside us all {DU}]

Returning the favour (sorry it's a bit late)

The melody you've got going is pretty good. Very good actually. I like the overall tune of the song, but I'm too keen on the crackling fire in the background. There isn't really much of a build up and release like the trance songs that I listen to have. But then again, trance isn't my genre and I don't have much knowledge on the style either. For what it is, it's great. Well constructed with a nice tune and volume.

5/5 Keep up the good work, sorry the review is a bit late...please forgive me :'(

decoyultimatum responds:

this is one of those songs where i knew i wanted to submit it but i knew there was so much for me to still do you already know this but when i made it i used fl studios demo which means there is a lot of stuff i cant do one of them is reload projects :( if i could i would have saved it and worked on it more it was like 3 hrs of non stop work and then i submited it