TuRdz's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Forging The Underworld]*]

Fived it, and nice Author Comment :D

The intro glitched I think. They was a lot of static. I don't know if you put that there but it didn't sound good.

Your wobbles were good, you just need to bust their volume levels. Turn down the lead too, it makes the wobble hard to make out.

I think you need to remaster it. The frequencies are classing with each other and even on low volume the sounds are clipping. The drums are interfering with your wobbles and it sounds like they're being sidechained.

Basically, I think you should leave this one as is and start a new project. Don't get me wrong, I loved the melody and the drum patterns were great. But technically it kinda wasn't the standard I was expecting from you. Your other one was A LOT better.

Anyway, as always 5/5 and this time 6/10.

Just my opinion, hope it helped. If you want more advice, look up some youtube tutorials and take notes, it worked for me. :) (My stuff isn't great though :S) So yeah, have a look at some videos, especially ones on mastering and EQ-ing.

Hope it helped :D

Solkrieg responds:

Alright, thanks for the feedback. I'll put everything you said here into use.

[Subsonic Lemonade]

5ed it

nicely constructed, volume control needs work though
5/5 9/10

[come with me {DU} wip collab]

Pretty cool

Nice synth and melody. A bit repetitive though. I'm not wearing headphones, so excuse me if I've missed anything. :)

Sounds good, can't wait till it's finished :D
5/5 8/10

decoyultimatum responds:

ya it does sound a bit repetitive but i think thats because i didnt put much melody into it the little melody i have is more of a melodic harmony anyways

[[Black Hole]*]

Technically good :)

The sounds you have are all pure class. All super super good quality, so it's perfect in the technical side of things. However, it lacks structure. Even as a trance/dubstep hybrid. The idea of a dubstep song is to hook the listener with a catchy intro [done] and then build up from there to a massive drop or release into the chorus.

For what it is, it's great. I suppose you can structure it however you want. But I like to think of it as an essay, intro, main, conclusion. This song sounds too jumbled and out of place. But that's my opinion, the song was great.

Your electro bass is top notch and really stood out for me, did you sidechain? Or just use an LFO, would like to know :P

Anyway, CRACKING first attempt, a bit more knowledge in the genre would serve you greatly. REAL potential here. I think you should keep it up :D 5/5...ofcourse and 8/10 :DDD

Hope it helperededed...

Solkrieg responds:

It did, it's only my first attempt after all. I used a trance bass, not a sidechain.

[{DU} 8-bit sorrow]

I think you can do better

Sorry if this sounds harsh, but here goes:
..(first of all, I did 5 it) :P

The first thing I heard was a synth that was wayyy too loud and clippy. Try using a filter on it and it may make it easier to listen to, or have it as an electro bass playing under everything and use another sample for your lead synth. I do however, like how the synth sort of dives down as you play a new note. It sounds good.

Over all melody was good, but not a sad one. Try dropping the tempo and give it depth with some reverb, low pass filters and other sfx. The tune WAS good, but not what I'd call "sad". Still great as ever, but needs fixing up.

Keep 'em coming man :) 5/5 7/10

decoyultimatum responds:

ya i recorded this one a bit different from usual and things didnt quite work out how it was supposed to after i submitted it on newgrounds i realized that it sounded different for the first it was a little harsh on the ears when i first made it it was softer and the instruments were easier to tell the difference between i will definitely remake this i myself would have only givin what i heard a 6 or 5

[{DU} fly wip]

Fived it!

Sounds a bit like your earlier track. Really love the melody of the higher pitched synth. The bass is however sounding a bit rough. I'd recommend you change it with another one. Apart from that, it's coming along nicely. Nice SFX too! Can't wait until it's finished :)

decoyultimatum responds:

this song started of me trying remake live (my old song i made but my program crashed) i would understand if it sounded similar to it i was making it like my old one but it then started to grow a personality of its own and it ended up sounding to different to be the same song but i got stuck and didnt know where to go with it :( thx for the review btw

[-AeF- Midnight Redux]

Really gewd :D

Awesome song mate. I can't offer anything constructive because everything is PERFECT hahahaha :)

Well done, keep it up :P

AetherFlaer responds:

Thanks I'm happy you think it was PERFECT!

[[Russian Privjet Dubstep]]

Perfect

Definitely deserves the #1 score spot (dubstep chart). It's great the way it is. I can't pick out anything that needs changing. Don't see how this isn't in the "Top Tracks of All-Time" list. System is wierded out...anyway, a 10er you good sir!

Keep it coming!! :)

Solkrieg responds:

Wow, Thank you! Although it keeps getting voted down by some people for what ever reason. It's really annoying how this system works.

[It's You and You're Naked...]

Not gonna vote.

The sounds you've got are great. But, you need to create a new melody. One that accompanies the mood of the song. For me, the mood is generated by the sounds rather than the melody in this song. I don't want to vote this down because it does feel bad when your stuff gets voted down.

So just take this as constructive criticism, hope it helps! :)

WalkingShrub responds:

Thanks for the review, it does help.
I think I see what you mean, it was a bit difficult to get this to sound different from the other stuff.

[Roflbot]

Make it longer!!!

Really nice tune you've got. Try adding a progressing beat to it. Would make things a bit more interesting 5/5 10/10

DJPeanutbutter responds:

I'm glad you like it ^^, I suppose ill finish it just for you xD but I DONT KNOW WHERE TO GO FROM HERE DX