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[The Watcher (feat. Tomothy37)]

Fived

Sounding alright at the moment. The sound at 0:57 is particularly good.

I think for the chorus you could add a few more sounds (incidentals and wobble variations) to make it sound more interesting. The mix needs some work (obviously), hope you get around to it soon :D

The melody you've got is great, but I'm not too keen on the added rain/thunder sound towards the end...then again, it's up to you whether to leave it in or not.

On a personal note, I would like to see some wobble variations and random sounds to give it character. The wobble patterns you have are great, just try mixing it up a little bit :)

5/5 8/10 Keep it up man!

Reali-tGlitch responds:

I'll see what comes up. I have a very touch time incorporating the random sounds. Especially in a darker song like this.

[dance beat dubz 124321]

Niceee

Sounds good! You might want to change up the beat in the intro. It's too 'dubsteppy'. Got some interesting synths in the chorus with a nice melody.

[Produce (unmastered-fresh)]

Fived

Pretty much what Jewelz123 said. Add a melody into the intro, maybe make it a bit longer...

1:01 is soooo good :D Keep up the good work!!! :D

[Moonlight dub]

FIVED

Awesome sounds! Not too harsh or anything. Just perfect "sounding". Mix is good, bassline is good. Though it does get a bit repetitive after a while, but the change in wobble basses kind of compensates for this.

Things to work on:
-Structure: Have a distinct Intro, Chorus, Outro at the least
-Lead up (Hook): You need to build up to the chorus, e.g layering sounds, patterns, etc.
-Drop: Make them "bigger" lol. Cut the sound like 2-4 or more beats before the drop, then come in with your chorus on top of a SUB BASS

That's just Newgrounds talk ^^ Great song man! :D

[[Alioth]*]

AM I TOO LATE???? D:

Too many genres. That's pretty much it. Good drums, good...other samples...:|

If you're going to go down the road of dubstep, the drop at 1:19 was magnificent. lol :D

Solkrieg responds:

Nah you're just in time :P.

It's another "transtep" in a way. Kind of like black hole. But I think this is going to be the last time I use dubstep as a lead.

[remember {DU}]

Fived

Really relaxing tune :D Though the snare is out of place. I would use a different one. Apart from that, I'd have to say this is one of your best decoy :) You should be happy with the result :D Well done man! Keep it up :D

5/5 9/10

decoyultimatum responds:

ty i believe its the best ive come up with so far and it will an up hill battle now that ive made this

[why we fight {DU}]

Fived

Great little tune you have here :D

Mixing is particularly good. Keep it up!

8/10 5/5

decoyultimatum responds:

thanks :)
it just kinda happened and i was like well i guess i could submit this

[goodbye full {DU}]

Fived

I agree with Solkrieg. Your lead is a bit too soft. Or atleast your second synth is a bit overpowering. Tone it down a bit. Also, the song does get a bit repetitive after a while, try switch it up a bit. Maybe make a distinct intro chorus and end.

8/10 5/5

decoyultimatum responds:

thanks ill try to keep it in mind when i make more music

[The Village of Quaint]

Fived

Nice tune! Very simple and easy to listen to. The drums are also pretty sweet, considering you made them yourself! :D

I think you can turn this into something BIG. Bring in some harmonies and counter melody and really build up to something. I think this is only half finished. EXPAND :DDD

8/10 5/5

Reali-tGlitch responds:

I'm not fully sure how....

[Clear Sky]

Fived

Great track, great mix. Can't say much else.
Keep it up man! 5/5 10/10

NeonEntity responds:

Thanks man :D
Cheers