Fived it!
Though not really my style of music. I found this a bit boring to listen to. No peak or build up really, but I'm sure you can add some effects and other funkay shidazzle to spice it up a bit. The synth was a bit over powering too. Just my preference :S
What WAS good though, was it's structure. I can see it turning out really good. It's perfectly laid out but, there's no real build up. If you automated a frequency cut-off filter for the synth to give it that "building up to a crescendo" type feel, then release into the chorus, it would be amazing. :D
To give it a bit more depth, just add a few more layers (progressively), like harmonies, bass lines, incidentals, white noise, etc :)
Hope it helped :D 6/10 5/5